The outline of our film - changes

Since planning our original film, we have made a few changes.
When she moves into the hall way, instead of the camera being positioned through the phone cable, we just get a shot of the phone hanging off its hook, with a continuous beeping sound.
From the shot of her stepping out the front door, we then see only her feet walking and then steadily getting faster into a run. From there we see her running away down a long pathway and she goes out of sight. We get a few more shots of her running in different places. She then gets to a gate way and a close shot is shown of her opening the lock. She then starts running again until she gets to a bushy area where she creeps through the overgrown shrubs and the camera follows her as though from someone else's view.